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Miss You
I don't miss you like I did before.
I thought perhaps I'd miss you more.
The space you filled is empty now,
but still, I don't miss you.
We blossomed and were beautiful indeed.
The garden was still plagued with weeds.
The beds are empty, dead, and bare,
but still, I don't miss you.
Your life goes on much the same.
I was weary of playing the same old game.
Leaving you again was easy,
and still, I don't miss you.
Something else will come along.
I'm sure I'll sing a different song.
The winter will be cold and long,
maybe then I'll miss you.
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Comment by Karrie Chambless on November 19, 2010 at 4:36pm
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Thank you, Robert.
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Comment by Robert P. Meyer Jr. on November 19, 2010 at 1:53pm
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Karrie,
I really like this. It speaks to my past and similiar circumstances. Well done!
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Comment by wiffledust on November 15, 2010 at 10:47pm
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prompt, poke, blast wth dynamite...whatever works! LOL!
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Lol! I prefer the term "prompt". ;)
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well that's why i exist. to annoy you into creativity! LOL! ;-)
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thank you for your encouragement. i wasn't gonna submit anything till you mentioned it on fb. ;)
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this is terrific, karrie! i had a feeling you might submit something! you pegged a feeling i've been having. love it!!!! keep writing!
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