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Revelation
Revelation
By Alejandro Barrios
This fragile line brings sadness
Down my spine.
Striking my reasoning,
Breaking my mind,
Found logic, wreaks my thoughts.
Corrupting my precious light,
Blending in with my soul,
This obscuring sight,
Forever changes
The direction of my life.
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Comment by Maryrose Orlans on October 3, 2011 at 9:34am
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Strength and beauty all at once!
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Comment by wiffledust on October 3, 2011 at 8:53am
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go with your poet self, alejandro! i like the line "corrupting my precious light"...good one. nice poem! i hope you write more! thanks for sharing with us
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