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Who is this staring at me?
I don't recognize the face I see
Time has changed so much
The way I smile, laugh, and touch
Deep within, I'm still the same
My faith, my heart, my name
One's core can remain in tact
So much else changes, that's a fact
My nature has always been to love
That was instilled in my soul from above
The way that I show it now has grown
In ways that are well known
When I forget who I am inside
And stress leaves me feeling a little fried
I find my way back by quieting my mind
Slowing my thoughts so that I can unwind
I then turn to You
You help me through
Each storm that within me rages
Each hurdle I face, You see me through in stages
I must grow, must learn
If the rain didn't soak me, if the fire didn't burn
I'd remain a child in an adult's skin
Trials I had to face so that the growing could begin
Mistakes were made and sorrows known
But through them, I have flown
Stronger, kinder, and wiser am I
And this will continue to happen by and by
I believe that the day I am done growing
Is the day that I am done living
As my reflection changes from day to day
May I still see the core of who I am, I pray
No matter how I change throughout the years
May I never let win my sorrows, doubts, or fears
Instead let hope, faith, joy, and love win out
The way of light and laughter is my route
I grab my reflection's hand
We skip through time across the sand
Making the most of life
Pushing past all hurt and strife
Loving those who are here while I have the chance
Taking a chance too on my dreams, desires, and romance
As my reflection learns, she grows
That's just how the story goes
Life comes and eventually it fades away
But that doesn't mean it can't somehow stay
So I choose to let my legacy live on
To not be forgotten even well after my time here is gone
One day you won't see my face
I will have gone to a better place
My final reflection, what will she look like to you?
I hope that it will be one that you find to be loving and true.
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I write like I talk lol. A few people ask me that, but *shrugs shoulders* it's just my style....but thank you for the suggestion! I do write from the heart and I am glad you like it. :)
(I started to edit what I wrote to you and deleted my message instead!) You poems reveal so much of your inner world; so many raw emotions that fill verse after verse. Have you ever considered taking some of your longer poems and creating several shorter ones from the verses? In the one above there are a few places where the verse could stand all alone without the verse above or the verse below .. that is a great thing!
Like your words below .. they are a complete poem all unto themselves! So to the point and beautiful!
"Life comes and eventually it fades away
But that doesn't mean it can't somehow stay
So I choose to let my legacy live on
To not be forgotten even well after my time here is gone
One day you won't see my face
I will have gone to a better place
My final reflection, what will she look like to you?
I hope that it will be one that you find to be loving and true."
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