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Could his voice be any raspier as he croons a love song or plumbs the darkest depths of the human heart and mind? What's he doing in there, with those creaks and groans and that moaning soft and low? They say he comes from down 'round San Diego way, leastwise, some here seem to wanna claim him...

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Comment by wiffledust on August 11, 2010 at 6:46pm
i think you got in there under the "clauses are ok too" clause! hahaha! don't worry about it. it's wonderful!
Comment by Maggie Friend on August 11, 2010 at 6:11pm
Well done Rick! An excellent guess. It is Tom Waits. I don't know if it's really fair to say that he's my favorite but I sure do like him a lot!
Comment by Maggie Friend on August 11, 2010 at 6:09pm
Oh Lisa! I don't know why I thought the assignment was 3 sentences!! Oh well...
Comment by Rick Reiley on August 11, 2010 at 5:58pm
Tom Waits is my guess.
Comment by wiffledust on August 11, 2010 at 5:17pm
it's 6 sentences, but i am not the punctuation police! hahaha....so we'll let it go..hehe.....ok. let's see who gets the moaning and groaning one!!! ;-))
Comment by Maggie Friend on August 11, 2010 at 5:09pm
Six? Oh no! I did consider using a semi-colon at one point but decided that wasn't fair so restructured the piece to be only three sentences with commas to denote pauses but not complete new thoughts. Fair?

I'd love to tell you who it is but I'll wait to see if anyone knows. I read it to a friend who knew right away but he and I both share the same enthusiasm for the artist.
Comment by wiffledust on August 11, 2010 at 4:52pm
oooo this is cool, maggie! are you counting in between punctuation as 6 sentences??? haha. hmmmm i'm wondering who it is!!!! great work!

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