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Final Breath
Solemn vows of tempestuous light
Overshadowed by songs of time
A place where the rain falls softly
On crimson roses fallen behind
The kiss of dew set upon the green
A vision in the warmth of a fire
A guardian covers the sky with clouds
Granting hearts with care's desire
Pathways to tread drowned by the sea
A forgotten past that closed with your eyes
Breathe your last existing breath...
Speak your final word as she cries
Lonely I walk with broken dreams
With memories of speaking your name
When angels took you away from me
When rain covered the roses with pain
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Comment by Maggie Friend on December 1, 2010 at 1:51pm
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This is a very moving piece and captures beautifully the way that grief can color our entire world.
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Comment by wiffledust on November 29, 2010 at 11:33pm
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oooo nice!!!! when rain covered the roses with pain is a great ending!!! and i particularly like the guardian covering the sky with clouds!!! thank you for sharing, heather!
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