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Affliction
As I lay in the darkness of another man’s bed, thoughts of you invade every fiber of my being. I try to push you away but don’t have the
strength. I attempt to pull you closer but you escape my desperate pulls.
Seeing you was both thrilling and excruciating. Betrayal and love catches in my
throat and refuses to abscond. The dark, skeletal hands of memories grab
endlessly at me as our soundtrack of passion and bitter disappointment winds
continuously through the twisted streets of my brain. Sleep doesn’t come; the
night simply stretches on into another arduous day of holding my breath.
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Comment by Steen Krause on September 19, 2010 at 10:42am
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Thank you, Dean. :)
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Comment by Dean Marshall on September 18, 2010 at 9:23am
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Powerful! I can relate oh so deeply! To ache for the unattainable is made all the more frustrating when there are bittersweet memories of what once was. (Skeletal hands....Perfect!)
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Thanks
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Comment by wiffledust on June 8, 2010 at 8:27am
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awesome description of an strong emotion!!!!! love it!!! so glad you're writing, steeneroonie!
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