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Well, that's a relief:
Mister Congestion moved out,
Left my chest behind.
Mister Congestion moved out,
Left my chest behind.
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Comment by Jodie Ann Christiansen on March 21, 2010 at 8:53pm
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yep...clever
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Comment by Jami Ward on March 18, 2010 at 7:06pm
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I try to get either an unexpected and/or funny line or a line that can be taken more than one way into my haiku. I don't always succeed, but it's a goal.
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good to hear... amusing that I ,oft', can take your haiku 2 different ways.....like in this haiku: 1. you are relieved that male moved out,; but, he indeed left your drawers/chest behind....
2. you are relieved that your lung congestion resolved and your chest remains intact.
anyways, thanks again ...it is fun !
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